Master-Awesome's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[Super Mario Adventure]

Mario is a serial killer.

FernandoBarreto responds:

Hey dude, I need some ideas to make more animations like that. If you have a history tell me please. PS I'm brazilian and my english os not so good. Thanks.

[Mario & Sonic: Worlds Clash]

AWESOME!

Lizam4 responds:

Wow, from Master-Awesome himself ;)

Thanks!

[It's Complicated!]

I won't lie, the music isn't my cup of tea. That's just me. Although, what really could use some work is how you made this music video.

Often, there is mostly walking and the emotions aren't powerful enough. I mean the woman is running away from the guy as he comes across as a stocker, but there needs to be more action. You could have shown the guy coming really in her space and then, the woman losing it and pushing him away.

There could have been more of a story. It's not that bad, but in terms of interest, it lacks a few things.

- Not enough action

- Not enough acting

- Not enough story

- Not enough emotions

- Not enough complications

Last one is important. You call your music video, "It's Complicated!" I don't see anything complicated in it. So far it just looks plain and simple.

The guy is stocking this woman, the woman is running away from him, and then, she gets enticed with this other guy and the stocker is left alone.

4 1/2 out of 5.

Rehktous responds:

I appreciate your feedback.
The title is intended to be ironic (ugh, just saying that makes me feel like a wanker).
Taking on board everything you said, 4.5 stars is pretty generous, thanks.

[The adventures of Celrii & Cumbi (Part One)]

This was awesome. My favourite part is when the grandpa changes the channel and his eyes break his own glasses.

RobertLowe responds:

Thank you very much master awesome, it appears Im getting alot of positive feedback, but my score is still suffering, wonder why..:/ Really appreciate your vote and Im glad you liked it :)

[Fockwits - Oh No It's The Po Po!]

I'm giving this a 3 and half because the artwork could use improvement. I think anybody can draw stick figures and circle. For the rest, it's all good. Keep it up.

Hairmilked responds:

thanks, this was my first animation and i'm trying to improve now :)

[FrogMan and Pico]

This was amazing. How did you manage to get Tom to help you out? I've tried my hardest and it usually doesn't help. Anyways, good job. I loved it.

artistunknown responds:

I just asked him if he could do it. It did take a while for him to respond initially, but he's pretty busy all the time so it's understandable.

[Captain Toad]

JUST SO YOU KNOW, YOUR SUBMISSION I VOTED FOR TOO! GOOD JOB! REALLY DESERVING OF THE DAILY 3RD AND 4/5!

k7vin responds:

Thank you! You truly are the master of awesome!

[Abandoned Projects Collab]

This music is so awesome that I even listened to this again and again and got the lyrics of it. See Lyrics:

I should be alone……. I’m just not the s…. Something I’m not …. So long…I’m so afraid you won’t like what’s underneath…..There is only constant got me folded inside……… Whiskers of the window pankicakey hold in mine ………Just one more chance just one more time……..I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky…….It’s those lonely times that make the strongest days…. It’s the late night lullaby that can’t be say……..Just for one more chance……. Just for one more time…….I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky……..There is only constant got me folded inside……… Whiskers of the window pankicakey hold in mine ………Just one more chance just one more time……..I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky…….It’s those lonely times that make the strongest days…. It’s the late night lullaby that can’t be say……..Just for one more chance……. Just for one more time…….I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky ….Just to touch the sky….We spring it to the summer……….We fall into the winter……..The seasons always change like the of my whiskers…….Stomp the navous…… Life isn’t easy….. pay check to pay check…….Number one’s been greedy…….Cause every town looks the same when you race inside the tunnel…….Watch my mom’s old prom the daily to be defeated subber…… Cause time fades like rain drops gets the sky…….And it’s like I’m stuck a pause with this lightning in my eyes……….Still trying to make the most out of the things I judge the most……..And lately I’ve been sitting….. Like feeling like a thous….I got these monsters in my bedroom…….I know not to open up…… Never really been awake….. I got that sleepwalking slumber……..I’m trying to myself while I look inside the mirror……..I can’t believe who I’ve become…….But thoughts are just a little like they say….. I’m all hands the devil is worth a shot……. So I stay out of precaution……fill my head with some buck shot……. I should be alone…….I’m just not the s…… Something I’m not…… So long……. I’m so afraid you won’t like what’s underneath……..But here I am……. Stretch and run…….weakness……I should be alone…….I’m standing ever closer to the end of my road……..Got a hard looking life………With the heads and the toes……..So remember this stove…….Fire or freezing……..They call……..middle of the………..Waste without a reason to go……..I just wana spread my wings so can finally flourish…….Won’t be defined by the purpose till I’m finding the courage…….Really act don’t want the feeling……. I can see through the past…..Once I’m out of this cage……. there’s no bringing me back……..So I end up going but, maybe I don’t know enough to spring…….On the squirrel that tells me that I’m finished…….Throwing up and every single night I hear you knocking and knocking……..to per fucking and not to think about you cause it’s a problem……..Oh too close……To keep you safe from all the petty bullshit……..Sted a living dangerous and pretending I’m a cool kid……and in the middle of the night…..I’ll sing you a lullaby…..I smell defines the monsters that can harm us in the darkness that says their run and hide……….I should be alone…….I’m just not the s……..Something I’m not…….So long…..I’m so afraid you won’t like what’s underneath…….But here I am……. Stretch and run …….weakness……I should be alone….. There is only constant got me folded inside………Whiskers of the window pankicakey hold in mine………Just one more chance just one more time……..I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky…….It’s those lonely times that make the strongest days…. It’s the late night lullaby that that can’t be say……..Just for one more chance……. Just for one more time…….I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky…….. There is only constant got me folded inside……… Whiskers of the window pankicakey hold in mine ………Just one more chance just one more time……..I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky…….It’s those lonely times that make the strongest days…. It’s the late night lullaby that can’t be say……..Just for one more chance……. Just for one more time…….I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky……..……..There is only constant got me folded inside………Whiskers of the window pankicakey hold in mine………Just one more chance just one more time……..I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky…….It’s those lonely times that make the strongest days…. It’s the late night lullaby that can’t be say……..Just for one more chance…….Just for one more time…….I lift my wings up high just to touch the sky……..

BoobMarley responds:

I actually just now logged on to NG for the sole purpose of listening to this song. Head over to Eqftc and Eye-Cue's page and let them know how you feel: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/543841

[PewDiePie Buys Grapes]

To be honest, the animation was a bit off and the joke was slightly humorous. I think the artwork couldn't been drawn with a little more care. The last part at the end was just lazy because anybody could make a person randomly spin around while move their legs. Take it from me, I have no animation program and I still can do it.

I think the textbox could have been a little more appealing. This was also very short and kind of takes the interest off at the end when I don't see the end result. In other words, the story didn't have a ending. It just started off and stopped with a guy moving in circles.

Also you've told me that I should apply more of a show, not tell rule yet, and you don't listen to your own advice because at the end, the purpose is written "Don't steal grapes idiot!" I would have to suggest two things to you for your next submission.

Suggestion 1: You could start taking a class in artwork, design, animation, look up videos, etc.

Suggestion 2: Try to look for something easier that may suit your skills and interest you.

I think you did put a lot of effort into making the movements more fluid and on your comedy, but after the way I was treated here, I've found that you can't focus on certain aspects that appeal to you, it must be everything.

I wish you good-luck for future projects and hope you take my advice on improving. I still liked it a little bit though.

FaceTwitPlus responds:

Hey.... thank for the advice man.... but I put lot of effort into learning Flash and the character designs.... thank for the advice again man...

[SqS5S1: Supply List]

This doesn't seem very awesome!

TheRealNat23 responds:

Then hopefully the next episode of this series is more awesome to you.